Lunar's Lust

at first I thought I found some hidden gem in the pile of trash in webnovel...the tow first chapters were promising..a serious mc with a great cheat kinda gave me the vibes of some epic cultivation novel...yet the moment the academy arc began everything went downhill...the mc got his first friend..yep the same fatty trope everywhere...and the we start an unending series of "whoha" and some childish shit..then the female friend with a tragic past...the author was trying to build a comedic atmosphere with a touch of some heartwarming moments and he failed miserably....the academy that was supposed to be some huge behemoth was gathering with its headmistress to watch a match between tow newbies that just started a week ago...there is no depth at all and everything seems shallow...the magic was absolutely trashy..I thought I was reading some martial art  novel...the author messed and delivered a very poor power system.....I can rant nonstop about the bad things in this story..so I will say it's a story full or overused cliche...no depth...no a single thing intresting..it may suit some new readers but as someone whe read hundreds of books...this novel only belong to the trash category

"Stop," the trainer called. Both boys were looking at each other, chests rising and falling swiftly as they caught their breath. There wasn't a trace of disapproval in their coach's voice, but rather a newfound admiration. "Well, it would seem you have met your equal."

Jutsus:

     "Seharusnya kau tinggalkan saja pakaian ini disini." kata Sehun setelah menutup kembali pintu tersebut.

<p>"Good. Now you need to go train and prepare. The exam is in two weeks."</p>

"Yes, I accept," as the knowledge flowed into his mind of how the herbs and other ingredients were mean to cause minor damage but heal right after over and over again until the body became stronger through mild repeated torture. He took some parchment and wrote a list of ingredients which he gave to the maid, "If possible have these herbs brought over to the mansion right away and inform me when you return so I might instruct you on how to add the herbs to the bath."

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

Writing quality is fairly easy to understand. It's above average for a webnovel, hence, the 3-star rating. However, it isn't exactly on the level of top novels here so that's that.Story Development is fairly generic but hey, that's what we're all here for.Now, Character Design. This is the one that made me drop and rate, for a very simple reason too. The author tried to make the mc a cringe japanese protagonist. Somehow, even when the girls are swooning over him, he assumes something outlandishly different. It's too stupid it isn't even funny, like, are his eyes fake? Surely, it would be pretty easy to judge if you're at least  presentably looking no? But no, the author just had to crash down mc's iq to the negatives.Updating stability, I didn't actually check.World background, fairly average for an isekai plot.

nice book author,it so intriguing and the character development is top notch