Loveless: Ephemeral Bonds

The elderly Kitsune had a mix of emotions playing across her face upon seeing the shapes and the letters on such a young kitsune. After long minutes of staring at the wall, a whimpering sound could be heard.

"Huh?"

The synopsis got me enthralled. I would be hopping onto the rise of this book, as one of the very first. ;-)

Interesante historia, se va desarrollando de forma constante.

Rather interesting story that suffers a lot from poor writing quality. Story would benefit a lot if it followed the standard dialogue format instead of this abomination that it currently has. It also has wrong spelled names and misused pronouns that is pretty common in this platform. Anyway if you can get past those story has potential.

The story is actually interesting, I recommend you use italicized words to convey inner thoughts.and break the paragraph instead of making it one giant paragraph.it's a good read with potential but oh boy, was i surprised by how you break the ranks from -F to SSS, that's darn too much 😂😂😂🔥Anyway you still did a good job author.

The grammar is great, the story is well written, you end up imagining as you read. the start was intriguing and amazing, I recommend the story to any of you