Sun - I'm joking , This time you know I did not kill your parents . They are still alive . It's just a medicine I shoot on them ok and the blood is colour.
La siguiente prueba fue Fuerza de sujecion, solo tuve que aplicar fuerza de un lado del dispositivo para no destruirlo, solo pude llegar a la marca de 823Kg antes de comenzara a ser inestable mi control sobre la energia.
ngl it's a very interesting story that with a very unique character. so far Peanut is my favourite character because I find him relatable. hope to see more of this
Your light novel is incredibly creative, especially with the unique blend of horror, martial arts, and fantasy elements. The character dynamics between Akane, Kane, and Adewan are engaging, and Akane’s secretive growth adds layers of suspense. The writing quality is solid, though there’s room to refine pacing in some chapters. Story development feels consistent and compelling, with the world background being rich and immersive. Character design shines, as each protagonist has a distinct personality and powers that reflect their growth. Great work so far—keep it up!”
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