Oh wow, I did not know they were going to translate this book. I had read a bit the MLT version but I had to stop because of how hard it was to read the MLT but even then I really liked the plot and idea of the story. So I'm excited to see how it is properly translated and I suggest everyone gives it a try.👍👍👍
just binge read the whole thing. I love it and am very excited to read more. the story is smart and entertaining. the characters are well developed and fun to listen to. the story has good pacing from moment to moment, nothing jarring or disconnected. besides a couple grammar or sentence structure problems it's very well written. the world's creation is developed steadily throughout the chapters and I'm excited to learn more about the world in the future. the info dumps are minor and quick to read through which I really appreciate, they provide useful information in the moment and don't bog down the story with long history. I've enjoyed where the story is going so far and am looking forward to where it goes in the future! keep up the amazing work author! I will keep an eye out for new chapters.
I have only read 15 chapters and I think it is shaping up to be a great novel. I don't read a lot of video game fiction, but, something about this really hooks me. The story is fun without making it too convuluted. Cheers!
Rocky will be hero for this world. Love the way you relate future life with present with the appropriate conditions. Whose your editor? Please update new chapters.
So here it is...I read the much I could...why not the latest !??cz of the poor choice of mc the author picked.the story base is good ...all details so far is also good...language or writing is also good...but the most disappointing thing is the way author put yhe story together...he wanted a comedy story but the way i found it at least is a crap drama type...*no offense author*then the mc...well he was supposed to be a comedy mc yea...but him being such a shitty piece of work and lame piece of shit with all he does and well as his way of doing things is bad ...for me at least...some might like it but i couldn't...the story has very good potential ...if the mc can be improved then it can be made into an awesome story...now some might say why does a comedy mc needs to be good in the head or something...well mind you people...doing shenanigans doesn't need a brain dead shitty fk mc...even a calm or intelligent mc can do it...and mind you nobody is perfect yea...and i don't expect him to be intelligent but at least use all the options available to to the best possible way etc...well whatever...hope the author improves these things...and if not just delete this review...Just wanted to give my view point so it will develop more...cz it's a very interesting concept and story line...well keep it up...
Uhhhh…. I’m willing to bet whoever is reading this reviews life that this exact novel has appears on webnovel. Or maybe the same premise where he travels back in time, builds a famous monument thing, goes forward in time, builds another, rinse and repeat.I havnt read this novel but I assume they are VERY similar judging from the description. If i’m wrong well… Oops?
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