Lorian Ellins

So far this has been an excellent book to read, goin between each character an their problems/worries is great. Keeps me wondering what is next to happen to any of them.. love the book so far

The story suffers from the same flaws as most chinese webnovels: low quality writing/editing, unoriginality, unnecessary monologues and info dumps. The same character tropes like in A LOT of other stories fx: The fat 'funny' friend, and the beautiful and strong (possible) love interest. The story also suffers from 'dragging on the story to meet word count'-syndrome.                                                        Thanks to obsoletefactor for review.

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Hey Cheers another novel translated by EndlessFantasy Translation :)They usually translate good title so maybe for now I will give 4 stars because I havent see the novel yet although the synopsis does remind me another novel.... ATG well because the mc deal with poison and more thanks to EndlessFantasy Translation :)

I m  at the initial chapters but I find this novel very interesting. There is a unique story development. But the writing quality is extremely poor and difficult to read. The character design seems ok. There was good stability of update a while back now it has been more than a month. Cannot comment on world background as I have not read more chapters

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Hello  Please, do you have a discord server or contact? I would like to discuss with you if possible .Also I like your story. Good job👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍

Currently I have got to try new books in difderent kind of genres which I had never tried before. Yours also in that group. Yet, when I was trying out this I realised that soon I will get iterrsted in this genre too.. Thanks to you author, I am saying. Actually, honestly saying my opinion. In love with this. Hope to continue since it's a new experience for me. So for now, I am telling you author please keep going.. I will recommend this to my frieds, so they could read this too. Keep going author. This work should be continue for the sake of us. ❤️❤️❤️🍭