A book with good potential.Not too bad pretty good for the author and readers that his english isnt too bad.overall this is a pretty decent book.word of advice for the author take in constructive criticism leave out all the haters.
Theres only been a few chapters so far so this is an early review but...Writing Quality: This one was unexpectedly good. The author has a good comman of english and I haven’t spotted any typos or grammatical errors. The sentence structure is well paced and varies from line to line to keep things flowing.Story and character development: The main character has a depth to him, and the plot itself feels realistic and raw. The characters are multifaceted and not just boring stock characters. I really felt the emotion during the appearance of the second creature. (Intentionally Vague to avoid spoilers)World background: Too early tp say much, but what has been revealed so far has been done through more show rather than tell. I love that.Overall, this book has the potential to become a gem. Author, please don’t drop this novel :)
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It was a gift that she truly treasured since Minjoon had made it from scratch, just for her. So the dress was one of a kind and couldn't be found elsewhere, something that basically money can't buy.
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