3* for both Stability and World Background. This novel reminds me of the concept of Shamless the TV show, with a little bit of a sci-fi twist. The MC is part of a financially struggling household of 6, being the eldest of the 4 siblings. He is also slow-witted and has fast scheme ideas to make money in order to help around. But apparently most of his schemes don't pan out as intended and ends up wasting more money than actually making some. That is until he meets Transdimensional Marketing Co. which hires him to market their futuristic products through his content creator platform. Sounds great right? However, the execution is like the MC, idiotic. I guess it's supposed to be a comedic novel, but instead it falls flat as slap stick. None of what was written made me laugh, but instead question the MC's mental health as he fumbles around with a great opportunity on his lap and wastes its potential by being stupid about it. Overall, great concept, but I think even the novel doesn't know what genre it's supposed to be, lol. Verdict: Dropped.
This is one of the best character development stories I've read on this platform. Most of the adventure stories have OP characters. This character constantly has to fight his own flaws, a story about growth in the face of failure and prejudice.
Wasted potential.Although by name you might think that there are 2 protagonists, in fact 65% of the chapters are about Male Lead, 30% about Male and Female Leads together and only 5% about Female Lead. And the hidden gem is in that 30% tandem part. When they try to play mind games against each other. When they undergo personal growth. That part is more than Ok. 5/5.Alas, 2/3 chapters of novel is spent on ML solo battles, training and adventures. And they're just not interesting, because ML is a typical protagonist. A system with quests. Revenge. The second personality. Training. A monstrous talent. Helps everyone in trouble. We've seen it all more than once and it's incredibly boring. 2/5.In general, the work could have been much better if, instead of Action, the author had spent more time on Psychological aspect of work
very good story on of my favorite kingdombuilding conquerer novels I'm at ch 46 haven't seen a lot of the novel but it looks promising. hopefully you can continue
Everything seemed to move in faster motion. Next thing she caught on was blurry faces of people, talking in what seemed like a strange but familiar language. She vaguely felt that they wanted her to do something, but she kept shaking her head, trying to reject them all.
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