oooh boy, this is poorly written with Ok translation. If you want something brainless to pass time this will work. If you are looking for a proper city builder skip this story. There is little reason or logic to much of what occurs. All the characters including MC are very flat and 2D. Every simple action the MC makes gets praised as genius ....
My kind of humor and an interesting story. If you can handle minor grammar issues (there/their, your/you’re, lack of commas, ’a lot’ being one word instead of two…) then it is an amazing book worth reading.
It's bland. Wow. MC GETS TO CHECK IN TWICE FROM TWO BLOODLINES! SO OP! SO GREAT! It's really important as his check-in ability is limited? Not really. It doesn't really matter. He checks in every now and then. It's basically overpowered MC without comedy or real motivation to exist...
keep it up author good work........................................................................................................................................................................................................
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