Life in New World (LNW)

well the idea is great, but china is sucking themselves alittle bit to hard of imo. Its just annoying to read every chapter about how great the federation is and how the mc is a law abiding citizen. yikes

This novel's Title is translated to 'Eldest Senior Brother is Ordinary' and is a very good comedy novel, you can search the title i mentioned and read the mtl. I am caught up with the raws and damn, this novel is a funny novel. Don't expect plot, only constant comedy.

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Seriously this is a diamond....I like how MC using his brain but when needs his strength is good..And i like the supporting character....

You have a very solid base, that can make your story progress from where it is now. Word choices, structure, delivery and writing quality is good. Keep it up!

The story is creeping AF. My instinct feel terrifying by reading this story, Keep updating and never give up for the author! This is my comment about your story, Hope you like it. 🤍🤍🤍

Will I say the synopsis made me wanna read and then I read the prologue and damn!! I want to read more. Good job Author, your story already caught my attention and I’d be reading more and coming back to review

"Teacher, we're near the capital. I can see it now," said Zara from the front of the flying creature.