Your world-building is fantastic! The post-apocalyptic setting feels so real, almost like I’m there alongside the characters. The balance between action and deeper, emotional moments keeps the story alive. I’m hooked, and I can’t wait to see how the story evolves. Keep going—your writing has the power to transport readers to another world!
First of all the approach of a second mc seems interesting and I have not seen this very much. It is a breath of fresh air and the story seems fun and serious at the same time.I am excited for more and recommend others to try it
this novel is good.overpowered mcbig haremfast paced storyi think it would be better if interaction between main character and his harem girls is shown more.but overall it is s good story.keep it up author san....
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