Novel is good but thanks to translator, I'm not enjoying it. There is a lot of greek words. War God Avatar = Avatar of Ares, Qi=Mana etc... There is a lot of shet like this in this novel. It is irritiating to read.
This Godly existence is now opening his malevolent dormant eyes to see flow of the fate again and shall deem this piece of work worthy of his Hollyness.
Hello, I am hoping to create a platform for authors and would love for you to join. There is a 70% compensation for authors from all revenue and a contest at my webpage(My username), along with a discord at the bottom of the webpage. I hope to see you there!
New reader here. The concept is good and overall story flow is decent. The only thing I'd say is work on those chapter titles mate XD. I like that it doesn't take itself to seriously though too many edgy stories out there (Including mine haha). I definitely see potential though good going. Hope it does well!
She strikes on the kryogremn and she transforms into a dark cloud flying all over the kryogremn. She then transform into her own body and she pulls the kryogremn so it can be removed from Sam's body. She successfully removed the kryogremn and it turns into a more sadistic looking monster. He grabs a pipe and she then throws it to Kristen. She is stabbed over the pipe because the kryogremn throws it to Kristen. Sam is fainted and Kristen grabbed him and she runs away. The kryogremn followed them until they're in the safe place.
Popular Reviews