the story was going good for me until the 70s. had a great pace for me maybe even a little to fast, then we get stuck in a 10+ chapter long "spar". it killed to mood of the story for me. the author definitely slammed on the brakes a little to hard here.
The reason behind this rating is pretty simple. The grammar is okay generally except for a few slip-ups. The novel itself has an interesting story line and world background. The problem is that firstly, it feels like I am reading a manga. That's how bad and immature most of the conversation seems. Like every girl will just throw themselves at the MC or show him kindness which is completely different from their character. As if the MC is the only one in the whole wide world who can catch a certain itch for them (🤢). The other thing is how are the siblings not willing to kill the guys who tried killing them? just beat them up? So if a pedo/rapist does something to your sibling you let them go with a little beating or something ? that's it? Are you even worthy of calling yourself their family?
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