I haven't read much so it may change, but the character interactions and dialogue is absolutely atrocious. I can't stand it anymore. It's plain bad, and I hope it improves later on, because there is a ton of potential in this novel. I really like all the parts where there isn't any interactions with other characters, but it should be that I like all parts of the story, not just a few.
magician with a teaching system and his army of lolis doing stuffs. the mc is less crap than most of the ones here, less cringy and no nationalisms since its a fantasy world.
I love how sci-fi and romance were both at play in this story. the writing quality was great, there were few errors but I love the play of words and the combination of poetry and prose within the writing style. it's beautiful. the characters and world background were also amazing. Overall, it is an amazing work of art. keep it up!
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