The story has a few major problems. A lot of name swapping where another name was used that didn't make any sense instead of the actual one. A lot of plotlines were incredibly warped, like he especially takes care that Lone never knows his name his Dave or anything. Give it a few chapters and suddenly she calls him Davey? The grammar was occasionally horrible too. The author needed 400 chapters to realize the infinitive of tired is tire and always wrote tier. So all in all uncomfortable to read but I liked the idea so I kinda read on. I'm done now. The end was unsatisfying in my opinion but what can you do. I don't really recommend it.
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