Kami-Sama

And Pyrrha, you are obviously a knight class with your shield but learn to use stun, you too Jaune. Both of you need to work on using your stun. Actually, ALL of you need to work on using your ability! But other than that Pyrrha you did a good job.

"Time sure passes fast . Since when did you become old enough to be able to protect your big sister ?! " said Aria while patting his head which was hard to reach since Ace was taller than her .

"Nothing. Nothing new." Rita spoke. "I was just asking Rita if she was sure that you had all looked everywhere .. "

Mite: 50/50

Sean abruptly stopped and opened the door like its a routine further causing River confusion as his (Sean) actions doesn't seem familiar.

In the shape of an "L" on her forehead

Karma Real life is a reality show about a unseen creature that causes some trouble to human. Its kinda interesting how the unseen creature can take control of human body.

This novel is truly an enjoyable read with a lot of potential. The story is engaging, and the plot unfolds in a way that keeps the reader intrigued. From the very beginning, it captures attention with its interesting premise and well-developed characters. Their interactions feel natural and realistic, making it easy to connect with them on an emotional level. The world-building is another strong aspect, adding depth and immersion to the overall experience. The descriptions are vivid, allowing the reader to visualize the setting and feel fully immersed in the story’s universe.However, there are a few aspects that could be improved. One of them is the length of certain explanations, which can occasionally feel a bit too long. While detailed descriptions and explanations can enhance the story, some sections might benefit from being more concise to maintain a steady and engaging pace. Additionally, there are minor grammatical errors throughout the text. While they do not significantly impact comprehension, refining the writing would improve the overall reading experience.Despite these small issues, the novel remains highly enjoyable. The strengths of the story far outweigh these minor flaws, and with a bit of refinement, it has the potential to become even more captivating. The plot, characters, and world-building make it a worthwhile read. I would definitely recommend it to anyone who enjoys well-thought-out narratives with engaging storytelling and immersive details. Overall, it is a great book, and I look forward to seeing how the story develops in future chapters.

Damn it, Ash! I've been trying to get some reviews on my book, and I leave you alone for three days, and you already have like 9 people in your review section. *Sigh*.