This is such an underrated gem, so sad it doesn't receive the worth it deserves.It is a short novel but very well written; from world building, character growth, plot twists and subjective views from characters everything comes together to make this novel whole.Would be appreciated if you could edit all the errors in translating but thank you very much for bringing the whole novel, it was a great ride. ^^
Hmm dont really know where to start, other than im extreemly pissed off, this novel got such a damn great potential, but sadly the writer is a masochistic japanese beta cuck it seems, and no im not saying this to be mean, this is simply a fact that sadly alot of japanese writers got in common and they act it out in novels making their MC as fucked up as they are, but not only a masochistic, beta and cuck, he is also a virgin it seems, wich ruins alot.Not sure where to start, but ill try to make this as short as possible even though i will start from the beginning it starts with this guy being born in a adult/late teeager body, he got a older demon lord that tales care of him, helps him, and does really a hell of alot for him, she looks like a 20 year old perky lady with a tail and Wolf wars. So after being helped alot and so on, she actualy offer him to have sex with her, as we get to read his mind in the kovel, he thinks of how he like her body and so on, but yeah being a japanese masochist, beta cuck and on top of that a virgin, how could he make his MC accept? Well ofcourse he doesnt accept even though he want tø, because this is full logic in a japanese writers mind. Anyway time goes on, we get to read the MC mind again and he admit to regrets not taking her up on her offer, still he got the offer up, but yeah he still doesnt jump her. So yeah bit more time goes by he leave to create his own dungon/City and pretty much forgets about the woman who helped him so much, but out of no where some shady dude makes alot of demons attack this lady and try to kill her with her dungon, Being the White knight in shiny armor he comes to save the day, just to see shes messed up and about to die any moment, but fear not the beta got the means to save her, though she dont want it, she want to pass on to go to where her (dead past love was) so she said no. As he got refused, he "miraculusly" found out he love her, so he confess to her even kiss her and so on, she ends up in the end accepting his offer and figure she waited long enugh and want to go on with the MC, so she become his wife/bride/gf. BUT HERE COMES A SHOCKER, after saving her and ressurecting her so she can live on, he basically gets her as his own monster (demon lord can create their own obidient monsters) so more than being his wife, he can order her to do anything, tho she already offered sex and so on, so not much he can use the power for anyway, they both go to mc's City to celebrate saving her and guess what happends when night time comes? He ships her off to another building and goes to his own house with other monsters he created and sleep with them ( sleep no sex) so imhere i am Reading this, any man who been a virgin before and got his first gf to bang knows that you would bang the shit out of her if you had the chance, not to mention this dude dont even sleep in same bed as her?!?! He goes so far as to send her to another Building. When i thought it couldnt get worse than this, the dude fucking tops it off again he sendes his wife back to her dungon and the two bloody times he bothers to visit her is when he want some crap her dungon can make and then he leave, no kiss no nothing, he treats her worse than you would even treat a friend. But further down the story after all this BS you can think of it as the dude probably dont got libido and his shaft dont work, but guess what, your wrong again, this dude even got a ability that makes him more horny, not to mention gives a ability to make babies with any race, he meets up with one of his faction allys and offer her to pay off her debht to him with her body, fully serious tho he wiggle out of it calling it a joke, right after he think to him self "i should go to a brothel to deal with this urge" To people who may think his wifes dungon is far away so will take super long time to visit her, well your wrong teleportation is available in this world, so would take him less time to go bang his wife he supposedly loves. Worst part of this is im no softie, so if it was written as this MC just took advantage of her to get that dungon shit and didnt love her and he was just lying, then sure i would been fine with it, but creating a relationship as i just described, im just out of words. If this story didnt have this wierd beta fucked up wife thats treated worse than friend BS over and over, i would given it 10/10, but this trash keeps showing up over and over just ruining the story for me, i regret reading so much of this story, i should just quit the first time he declined her, knowing i cant expect much of 90% of all japanese writers. If you hate the typical beta masochistic cuck stuff that is in 90 of all japanese animes/novels, then awoid this story like the pest, i deeply regret reading as far as i did, this writer really just take the japanese beta thing to a whole another lvl.If this BS was written by a 10 year old who dont know what love/relationship and so on is, then i would understod it, but honnestly its no excuse to any of this bad writing.
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