absolute bull that the release rate is so slow for a paid novel. fix yo **** qidian. It is also annoying that there is a 140 character minimum for writing these reviews.
This story is very fun. Seeing our mc fight the mc of the first world is very fun and the interactions with the system are fun. One thing that does annoy me is the proactiveness of the MC, he often just lets things happen without actively being involved in the plot. I understand why he does this and it also makes sense because it is his first world but I hope that changes as the story goes on and he goes around yoinking a lot more important stuff. That being said, the MC isn't a weak character though some of his actions can be seen as a little cowardly.The story right now is pretty simple and its enjoyable. I don't have any major problems with it, it's not great, its not bad. This story does not deserve a 5 but due to the nature of this platform I gotta give it a 5 otherwise I may as well have killed its parents.
I like it for now... its different from other vr novels its a interesting idea hope you keep it up with the updates and dont drop it btw i didn't read the whole novel just read the 1 chapter.. but for just the idea of a vr game that you can cultivate you get 5 stars from me.
The story line seems okay, it's really hard to read due to the numerous grammar mistakes but those can be solved easily. I was confused at the flashback as I did not really know what was happening. Also, it would be nice to have a clear example of the currency, what are moon coins in pounds or yen?Apart from that, it seems to be thought out and there is clearly effort put in here, good job!
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