It's Hard to Raise a Wife

Kenji immediately raised his hand. "Oh! Oh! I know that."

Author, your novel has great potential. It has good world background, story,plot, etc.But your writing style has problem. Every chapter you write recently(last 50 chapter)all has unnecessary word filled the 80% of story it's feel like reading a text book not feel like a novel.In a novel there should be character to character conversation not a third person describe like telling us children story.so, author I suggests yo to change your Writing style

it is a intresting story and i could love to read more

I never thought that the day would come when I rate someone 5. But so far I've enjoyed reading each and every chapter. I'm in love with the world setting and the MLxFL interactions.