Invictus: Memoirs of an otherworlder on a mission

I was shocked how can he ask me a favour we currently met anyways I said yes what's the favor he said can u pls leave your friends I don't think they are worth it of your friendship I said what are you talking about they are my friend I know them better than you I had satyed longer than you how could u say such things well why can't you see they are using you as he saw them coming near he said pls leave them I don't think a nice girl like you should hang out with these bitches I m sorry i used that words but the way they treated you back there I know they do this every time to you I will take a leave first and sorry to spoil your day..

<<Closing Game Store>>

Love it very interesting keep it up👍👍👍👍👍

All in all , it's a damn good read. There are punctuation errors throughout but nothing that makes it illegible. I like the twins they seem badass, and the struggles to greatness the the MC has. There is a bit of mystery so far that I can't wait to see come to fruition, but if I'm being honest I want a book about Abaddon lolol like so bad. Mans was out there being a Kratos and got locked up, and he's STILL powerful af. lolol ugh I like that guy.

Very good debut, i love the concept i hope the author dont surrend and update with more chapter

Hi everyone Author here this my first book and first time writing so feel free to tell me your mind but please no harsh comments