Hahah I JUST GAVE MYSELF 5 STARS!!!Anyways im here to say that im new to writing. I havent seen much sasuke/mha fanfics so i decided that i wanted to write one. I totally didnt expect getting so much attention from it since i was doing it for fun. Ive also writen a fanfic about itachi in dc world , it is called “Itachi Uchiha in Arrowverse”. It might not be good but if you want to read about it then please do so. #PLUGIf you guys have any complaints dont be scared to tell me, i could really use those. I want to improve my writing so i could give you guys the best stories. I have many stories i have in my head but it is very dificult writing about it.
The main character goes from intelligent and pragmatic to merciful and naive within about 30 chapters, on the level of a Japanese MC at that. "Oh, you just tried to kill me? That's fine, you can leave." At first, the MC killed threats without hesitation, yet later, he risks his identity being discovered (which would instantly get him hunted by those far more powerful) to kindly ask a group "please don't hunt wisps anymore". The foolish main character combined with the trope-filled writing killed the story for me, and likely will for anyone more fond of calculative/antihero MCs.
Personally for me, the story is meh.The character design is half-hearted, the world background is vague and the power system is mediocre at most.The tone of the novel just didn't click it with me, guess I'm way too serious for this type of novel.For an average reader who just want a novel to kill time with, this one is meh enough.As for the other readers, I guess they read far too many shitty novels that their quality judgement fell down.
The cover 5/5The synopsis 5/5The writing? It was amazingly written and it surprised me that Webnovel has such quality writer. This is a hidden gem and I'm glad to have discovered it.
Great story overall. It has an interesting plot. Characters are fleshed out and not onedimensional. Although the protagonist has a cheat (system), it doesn't immediately make him the strongest being in existence, it makes him work for it. The system in this novel is also quite unique(At least I haven't read / found a similar one).But as always, I can't make a decision for you. Go ahead and give it a try, since if you're reading the reviews it means you are interested in this book.
Omg I love a good read. First of all the writing is beautiful and smooth. You don't even realize you have read a lot, that's how good it is. The story is captivating right from the first paragraph. I love the storyline and can't wait to continue with the book.
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