Incrementum

Damn, I just love the write ups, just 4 published chapters and I am already in suspense.  can't wait for other, I ANTICIPATE...More inspiration to your novels.❤️💖💖

In this gripping narrative, the author weaves an intense and atmospheric tale that keeps readers on the edge of their seats. Elara, the protagonist, finds herself caught in a world where the line between reality and illusion blurs, and every step she takes seems to draw her deeper into an unknown, suffocating force. The story begins with a sense of isolation and unease, as Elara experiences strange visions and a growing feeling of being watched. The subtle but persistent presence of something sinister builds a layer of suspense that drives the narrative forward, and the author skillfully uses this tension to engage the reader’s emotions.The first-person perspective allows us to feel Elara’s confusion and growing paranoia, making it easy to empathize with her as she navigates a reality that seems increasingly distorted. The strange occurrences at school, where she feels the unsettling gaze of her classmates, intensify the feeling of isolation that Elara experiences. This dynamic, where everyone around her seems to know something she doesn’t, amplifies the anxiety of the narrative, as it taps into the universal fear of being an outsider and not understanding what’s happening.Lily, a friend who appears later in the story, serves as a pivotal character. Her cryptic warning to Elara heightens the sense of mystery, and the reader is left with more questions than answers. This sense of intrigue propels the story to its cliffhanger moment, where Elara is forced to confront the unknown forces that surround her.The pacing of the story is well-balanced, with moments of introspection and tension, followed by sudden bursts of action and revelation. The atmospheric details—such as the overwhelming stares from her classmates and the suffocating feeling of being watched—are vividly described, creating a sense of dread and building a chilling atmosphere that is central to the story.However, some aspects of the story could be developed further. For instance, the reader is left wanting more clarity about the nature of the threat Elara faces and why she is singled out. While this uncertainty adds to the suspense, a bit more context would help ground the narrative and allow the reader to fully connect with Elara’s plight.Overall, the story does an excellent job of blending psychological horror with suspense, and it keeps the reader hooked with every page. Elara’s internal struggle, her confusion, and her growing fear are portrayed convincingly, making her a relatable character. The mystery surrounding the unseen force that watches her creates an eerie, unsettling atmosphere, and the cliffhanger ending leaves readers eager to discover what happens next.

As I'm about to reach 100 chapters, I think it is best to leave a review now. Writing Quality: I leave it 5 since, although alterations slowly appeared, I am consistent on the quality, from complex to simple, as I'm also experimenting and learning along the way. If you dislike something, do let me know!Stability of Updates: It's undeniable that the first month's updates sucks, but after I got into premium, I have been consistent in updating 2 chapters per day. Although I wonder how will I be able to remain consistent while studying in a state university, but, hey, I'm trying my best!Story Development: A shameless five stars. Firstly, my foreshadowing and my not outlined plan in my head has been consistently written with some alterations, of course. Secondly, although I have yet to end the volume 1, I am confident that the development will lead to what I have envisioned as I was meticulously setting those flags. Lastly and most importantly, the story development are deeply aligned to the characters and world background without straining each other.Character Design: Another shameless five stars. From Qwanisha to others, they have a very dinstict character aspects, that even I, the author, felt like I was not writing what they are supposed to say, but narrating what they are saying. Comically, even I found my side characters unpredictable--of course, except my main character since we can easily familiriaze how he reacts. As the MC and his beasts are the limelight, I am trying my best to design a likeable different characters of his beasts.World Background: Another shameless 5 stars. I introduced races and was trying my best to put emphasize to them--faeries, luminaries, something you weren't familiar with. These races are relevant on their relationship with the humans, especially the main character and side characters. Of course, we should talk about the Tower--It is an existence that challenges the invited players to ascend each floor. I am currently focused in The Trial, as it covers two volume--Volume 1: Hellish Trial, Volume 2: Heart of the Burg. However, the Trial already emanated the challenges of each floor should be, resulting on taking some time to formulate it to the best of my abilities. In addition, the world building has a heavy emphasis on this story, as the world not only revolve around the Tower but the Earth, i.e. its current state, technology, etc.FAQ 1: Will there be romance author?As of now, I haven't decided on the female lead yet, so it might happen on Volume 3.FAQ 2: Harem?Sadly, no. I'm not into an idea of being in a relationship with more than one.FAQ 3: Is MC an idiot?Hmm, if you are used to being alone and have faced the harshness of the reality, you will have a different values and vision. He might commit some mistakes, but he'll continue to learn.FAQ 4: Aren't you shameless for giving your first review and rated it as 5 stars?I am, no doubt, an author who disliked his stories, but this one... I like it. Since I am the first to give a review, why won't I be biased? XDNow read it and let me know your thoughts!

Hello! I'm just a shameless writer leaving a review on her own story. 😅I am an "experienced" writer that was active between 2014 and 2018 till I stopped writing because of personal reasons. Recently I started to get back in writing business and while I might not be in my prime, I hope to deliver an engaging story that readers might enjoy. ^~^ Unfortunately English is not my first language, so please bare with me 🙏.  From this point on, I encourage you to give a story a try, or if you are interested, you can go on and read how the story was created. Toodolo~_________•°•°•_________There was this one story idea that was going on in my head for a long time and that I wanted to put on paper, but when I started, I noticed one thing. The story and world building I thought of was so complicated that I struggled to put it all in paper. I had to make sure that the readers would understand the story and what is going on without too much info dump and due to my long break in writing, I had to drop the story and take a step back to rearrange it. Wanting to write something more simple, I came up with a premise of a vampire hunter turned vampire, thinking that it would add a nice twist to the story. From that point on, I continued to start thinking about the characters and arcs I want to write till I finally got an outline of a story I want to tell. With the help and support of my friends and boyfriend, I managed to gather enough motivation to make this story alive and to get here where I am today. And so, here we are! What I love the most is seeing people enjoying in what I do, so I would be more than grateful if I could get some feedback! I wish you a nice rest of the day and happy reading! 🤗

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Dalam mimpiku dahandahan seperti tangan yang mendatangkan ketenangan. Seperti pelukan ibu.

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"… I would like that very much." I opened my menu and turned off the BGM.