i hate system who give's quest which failure means death or any penalty. instead of guiding him it's forcing him. he doesn't even need that system with his past experience, worst of all their is a death penalty 'what a joke'
Well the book is pretty good, if u like system novels.Ig, but the author seems to love the whole u go into a situation and it continuously get more and more out of hand, like ik why he does it, to make the story longer, keep us "on the edge" and more "interested". But he has done it like 4 times already. And it's just become more and more annoying. I say its poor story development/writting, i want to say the author doesnt know how to write a balanced battle/ event so he does this to continue it. Of course its my opinion. But of thats his writting style, i think im just gonna get tired of him dragging out events.Also I find it interesting how the author keeps having the mc bash his earlier parents because of their malicious behavior to justify joining the church but clearly explained that the church can be just as bad with the divine knights. Like tf, i dont need you to not to join them, i just dont want u saying one is more good than the other, its dumb, fake, and lackluster. I dont like seing the mc make dumb excuses, but rather his acknowledge the fact that he joined the church as a good way to wash his identity and find an organization to be safe it. And if he wants to align himself with the church to do that, then do it, but say thats why ur doing it, not this bs. And the author keeps pushing this message by saying the church can use ur star or what ever to see if ur bad, it didnt work before w the divine knights, and prob doesnt work now. So stop lieing.And if the author will continue doing this nonsense, then i think the story will be executed poorly.Aside from bad character writting, poor story in these events, the world background seems to be alright, ig .... Idk its trial reads after all ...
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Of course she would be hurt and disappointed when it was her fans who didn't accept her lover. They even caused trouble for the guy. That was what the people realized. Her fanclub right now was grieving on their past actions-- they hurt their Goddess! How could they do it?!
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