The writing in the story could do better but if you comment on the story the auther will reply or like it,so if you ever see a mistake just comment it to help the auther out.The auther updates frequently with chapters.Since the auther works so hard leave a lil comment here and there to help keep the auther motivated! They write two stories so I know they must be overwhelmed at times 📝The story development is interesting and I can’t wait to see what else the auther has planned for the book.The charcter design feels a little rushed at some moments but thats just my opion🤷u200d♀️(You may like how it is so check the book out.)Lastly the world background is thoght out really well I give it a 4.5 🙇u200d♀️P.S like I said the auther is really friendly and helps if something confuse you and if you are reading this have a nice day
Every CN cliche you can think of is in here. It has everything from baseless face slapping to the useless female following MC. If you want to read something, save yourself the migraine and read something else
Great story. Any hint u can give on the romance/harem? Also, will the MC always be solo or will he start his own faction? I love when MC actually has their own power base - it makes more sense in the game as well rather than doing everything solo, but up 2 u.
absolutely awesome story. ideal protagonist imo. doesn't go out of his way to find trouble but also doesn't go out of his way to leave trouble hanging. still early days (60ish chaps) but story development is good so far without spending too much time on any 1 part of the story. hopefully he continues to get stonger at the same pace 😉
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