Immortal Spirtit(Bleached Immortal)

love story so far. well written thought out line for where the system and mc are going. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍✊👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👊

Hi author I love this novel of yours so I hope you can make more capters pls😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

“Spirit Cultivation” is the first book. This continuation of Xuefeng’s story, along with his many powerful and gorgeous wives, is a journey worth traversing. Follow his epic tale. You will fall in love with his wives and each of their unique stories and how they all came to fall in love with the same man.Powerful element cultivation combined with Fate spirit companions leads to immense strength....eventually.

So far as of chapter 13 the story seems quite interesting and I see a lot of potential in this story. However I do think the characters could use some more characterization

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Just started this book but if it's anything like arcane slayer I'm sure it's amazing.                                                                                                                                                                                                           

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Within the first chapter you can tell how much work the author built into the world building. The characters also actually act how they are meant to act which is an issue you see in some other novels. The only issue you could possibly have is that there are some grammar issues but the author gets better with it as it continues. But it really is one of the most world built system novels I have ever read.