Immortal Becomes a Stay-at-home Dad After Return

YAYAYAYAYAYAYA!!! AQUA MAN HERE HE COMES ok, this sounds cool, but when he says there are plenty of fish on the sea does he mean that metaphorically or does he mean literally.  Quite concerned he is gonna spoon my future food.

unfortunately the botched attempt at comedy (which is the main focus of the first 7 chapters that I read) makes it unreadable for me, and I would guess that anyone above the age of  12 would likely share that opinion. Save yourself some time and avoid it.

Another book that I'd love to read. still reading, so far so good. will follow up :-)) Thank you for the wonderful story! Cheers~! <3 <3 <3

I just started reading and it got me hooked! im not a pro gamer but i love playing games and this just rub the right spot for me. I wanna continue reading but...no more chapter lol

so far the chareters are quit different. they are all supposed to be the evil type monsters that the hero is supposed to fight but you see life from there side.

One of the most amazing fantasy fiction! Highly recommended! Although I have read only a few chapters of the story. It has already hooked my interest. Keep up the good work author.

Novel is quiet interesting in my opinion.....1. Writing quality is upto standards, just that there are some mistakes here and there in spellings like calling a male her and a female him.Some sentence structures are not properly structured...like you can change, "There is not something will happen to him" to " Don't worry, Nothing will happen to him "etcetc.2. Story is also developed well till now....nothing much to say, you can see the gist of the story from the synopsis and read it....3. Character design is also detailed, nobody seems like  2 dimensional character...though you can try giving some characters some inner thoughts and could also give them some backstories to make them appear more real to the readers.4. For now updating stability is also well, as can seen from 8 ch/ week on the front page.5. Don't know much about world background....I mean it's just starting afterall......Overall nice work from Author San.

Someone, please find a translator for this story!!!!!!! >____<' This story was the reason I joined WN, but it's the only one in my list not updating *argh*