When Ivan’s daughter was born, she was named Bella! Why Alexia now? You never mentioned her whole name or even if she has 2 names! Can you please be consistent with your namings especially who’s talking and being talked to? It’s so confusing author! The story is good but the composition is annoying
Dear Author, I am begging you to hire an editor/proofreader if your are too busy… Your stories are good but they will just be wasted if they won’t be proofread/edited properly The feeling of happiness that the stories should be leaving as an impression to readers are just being replaced by annoyance
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