It's a well written novel with a likable protagonist, a clear goal, nicely written side characters (I wanna say well written, but most of the important ones are in barely 10 chapters) and a nice ending. Overall, it's greatest flaw is how short it is and, for me personally, that the set-up romance never happens, tho I guess that itself also fits nicely in the story. Second biggest flaw is that the protagonist is the classic Novel child character - way smarter than any child her age should be... Tho that isn't really a problem. And the part that icked me the most during my read was the reveal of the truth, which was a minor disturbance in my read. It's also written in fppov. Overall, the flaws sound overwhelming, but most of them are not really distribing the experience. Hope you'll enjoy it. It's no Shadow Slave or Lord of Mysteries, but it's a nice story to read when you have some free time
[TL Note He He He. . . I know that people will want to kill me for this, but this entire chapter was made up by me and is not an actual chapter. Do leave behind your 'feels' for this fan fic. ]
This was supposed to be at the end of chapter 43 don't know why in this site they didn't include it.
oh there is a missing chapter which is titled 'Daan Forest' which are the real chap 43.
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This was supposed to be at the end of chapter 43 don't know why in this site they didn't include it.
oh there is a missing chapter which is titled 'Daan Forest' which are the real chap 43.
I have really loved your books , it's a humble request if you could update them.