truthfully I got lost just within the first 12 or so chapters, nothing is explained and the events feel extremely jumbled and out of place, the grammar it self is good and I could see this improving but I feel the whole beginning would have to be re-written once again in order for the flow of the story to be back in order
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Didn’t like generic system novels so much until I read this. Good writing quality, dumb MC who becomes a total savage, and overall nice world building, I love it. Keep up the work author!
'Arthur' immediately went to Rob and talked to him regarding on how to enslave someone. Luckily, his research is based on reverse engineering the enslavement seals. Rob gave 'Arthur' a seal and how to imprint it onto someone.
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