I absolutely love this story and there isn't really anything for me to complain about which is highly unusual for me because I'm usually so nitpicky. The characters feel well fleshed out and don't feel like props to make the main leads appear better. The main leads are also very well thought out. I'm a big fan of this story and Forgotten Legend Of The Bloodied Flower.
"Hey, I saw many of the farmers' sickles and that one is the sharpest so far" Mariko looked at the sickle. "Look at that! It's even shorter than a normal sickle!" She gestured to Ayumi to take it to her, Ayumi did picked it up by the sickle, once Mariko got it, She held the chains up for Mariko to take it as well. "This one looks sick! This is the first time i ever hold one!" Mariko held it by the chains and spun the sickle up in the air. The whirling noise and the chains made Chiho look back. "Mariko-san!" She quickly lowered her head in a second she saw her spinning the sickle. "Stop that!" She panicked. "Calm down~!" Mariko stopped it by catching the sickle. "Don't ever do that again here!" Chiho scolded Mariko. "Yeees~" She answered, Then She looked to Ayumi. "Well? How's that? Can you handle this one?" Mariko asked her, Ayumi was staring at her for a second before gasping hard. "No way!" Her answer made Mariko giggle. "Chiho will use the long axe, my axes is mine, so it's yours.. You can do it!" Mariko encouraged her then throws the chained sickle to the ground of the sidecar. "Hey!" Ayumi moved her feet away from the chained sickle. "What? It's far away from you!" Mariko laughed. Ayumi fought with Mariko with the rest of their trip.
"I'll go pick you up right after I'm done. I'll wait right in front of your company." When she heard what the man said she couldn't help but to get excited as she thought about it. A sweet smile appeared on her face and her cheeks blushed while she nod. The sight of her looking so lovely makes him feels happy and he swear in his heart that he'll protect her forever.
Nice plot. however, there seems to be no character development. I already read 800+ chaps but there is barely progression in the story. author, I appreciate your hard work in writing but please don't repeat the parts of the story, usually their thoughts by rewording it. it's getting quite boring.
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