Harry Potter and The Mystical Journey

{Condition met.}

Jeff: You are pretty loyal, so a world like Highschool DxD wouldn't work, as those almost always involve harems that grow to a ludicrous size.

"If that's what you think, I'll give it a try."

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Continue plz i need the full plot

Honestly, I like the story, the problem I have is how it's written. It's very hard to read this. When someone talks try surrounding the text with " instead of adding an - in front of the message. But overall, I like the rest of it. Solid characters and world-building. I recommend this story if you re-write it.

I read the novel, its amazing and fabulous.

not bad but not my cup of tea good luck ..

Only a couple chapters but so far I really like it! The backstory is unique and I like how it takes someone who should have everything and instead make them struggle and grow.  Only 3 chapters so far so I hope it continues and and gets more popular!