Dialogue is pretty simplistic and basic. Dedicated proofreading would help greatly. Grammatical errors, especially tenses are too rampant. Also, you should put in the description that there is a strong religious connotation, bordering on preaching in this story. Too bad.
Hi author/Ali Parker - Your other books are well written & realistic with drama twist & turns plot .. I am waiting for this book to get completed.. when will that be?
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