So the MC dies after seeing his GF out with another man. he then proceeds to get OP but remains loyal even when a vampire lady offers herself quoting he has someone to get back to. this tanked the character design for me because he owed that gf nothing. there wasn't enough relationship buildup for me to care, no trials they overcame other than he was lonely. the loyalty he gives her is not warranted. everything else would make this a great story. slight grammar issues but nothing you won't find in other novels.
Hello! Author here! I would like to take this chance to rate my own novel 5 star because I know I will do my best to get my reader's attention. I am excited to write this and I finally published it. Can't wait to write the future chapters. PLEASE DO LEAVE A REVIEW AND GIVE THIS NOVEL A CHANCE. ADD TO YOUR COLLECTIONS AND SUPPORT. THANK YOU!!
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