It's a pretty good story so far. minor and confusing grammar errors. For example in the second chapter (minor spoiler) the child wraped in cloth, they keep switching gender he, her, and back to being a boy. This isn't a final rating as the author is still editing. So far if they gave a general description of the characters like hair color, eye color, mentioning Britain helped, hopefully this helps and the author sees this.
Honestly, it's... kinda bad. Plot conveniences everywhere. The MC has apparently been able to fuse his "descriptors" for a while, but he NEVER tries to do so until the beginning of the novel? He uses it once, then seemingly forgets about it, never mind any of his other descriptors that might also benefit from fusion. The only reason the plot moves forwards at all is because the author draped a bunch of faceslapping antagonists and bizarre system mechanics over the plot.
Full of plotholes. MC discovered a hidden quest that billions of others did not over a century. This quest was in plain site. I mean, look at all the speedrun of any games out there, people find out everything. Novel story drop terribly when the story moved into being a harem. It's basically him finding more girls to bang. Girls that fall for him are one dimensional. Follows the "he's nice to me, he seem confident and powerful" trope. When I said bang, I wasn't exaggerating.
I´m currently at chapter 40 and so far it has been pretty good. It reminds me of "Chrysalis" but slightly more ´realistic´ in terms of size and capabilities of the creatures.
I’m honestly more surprised at myself for giving this book 5 stars, but it’s well deserved. And that’s saying something considering the fact that I rarely ever give 5 stars so easily. But anyways, on to the review.I’ve read only one book in this genre before and it wasn’t exactly similar, it was more like a game system type of book and I was thoroughly disappointed. Which is why I didn’t have any high expectations for this book but I was surprised, even from the first chapter! You had me hooked! How on earth did you do that?! I kept marveling at how perfect the grammar and world-building was and even though it was honestly a bit weird at first, seeing things from the eyes of a lizard-like-monster (I honestly hope it gets a name soon😂) and seeing it hunts and grows, I expected to feel disgusted but all I felt was intrigue! The writing was seamless in the sense that every word connected perfectly with the next to portray a vivid image of your world to a reader—me. And it honestly was a page turner. Which is why I’ve added it to my library. I’m definitely going to keep reading. My only critique are a few punctuation errors here and there but that’s a minor thing every author deals with and I’m sure you can fix while you’re editing. Asides that, great job for introducing this “new” genre to me and leaving me with no disappointments!✨
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