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Really a very good novel, at first I thought it will be boring just some face slapping but the author has made an excellent work from world background to character design, I recommande it
Dystopia? Check.Excellent power progression? Check.G o d ? Check.Great writing? Check.A sizeable amount of chapters? Check.Count me in? Check.Our world must not be a dystopia if web novels are of this level of quality.Greak work!
Has so much potential but the story is all over the place. Starts out nice enough, lays out the method of leveling and such. Then proceeds to discard the method and throws around big numbers with no real explanation of how he is leveling at all. Easily kills opponents who from the description should be plenty stronger than the mc. And at one point pulls either an inventory or item creation method out of no where with no explanation. If youβre just looking for a fun read and can ignore the flaws its alright but if you want consistency then go elsewhere.
The best out of the novels each week. The plot of the lucky bags seems fairly overused, but the actual story's plot is actually really nice. The levels and power scaling feels similar to LotM, and the characters are interesting. The main character is also a normal person, which is nice. There's an overarching world background that has some mystery to it, which is why I enjoy this story.
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