Guardian of The Realm

"Itu dia?"

Never!

"Why did I kill him?"

I like the story. writer should improve grammar a bit. i like the leads. Some mystery is there.

So then, let's begin with my own EXTREMELY OBJECTIVE analysis.Objectively speaking, my book is, of course, the best. No one will ever write a better one. Clear as day.Jokes aside, here's my assessment:Characters:Not bad, but far from good enough. The emotions are somewhat lacking, and a unique way of speaking would improve them.On the positive side, they have their own personalities and don’t just revolve around the MC.Worldbuilding:I’m proud of this. It becomes clearer as the story progresses—maybe in Volume 2 or 3. But I’ve put an incredible amount of effort into it.Story:It’s not bad, but it could have been developed a bit more.Overall, I think I’ve done a good job, but not a great one.There’s still a lot of room for improvement.By the way, it’s a rather slow-paced novel.If you have any questions, feel free to reach out to me!

Veer on Titan is an engaging sci-fi adventure that follows the journey of Veer, a young boy who grows and adapts to the harsh environment of Titan, Saturn's moon. The story beautifully captures his transformation from a naive, unsure individual into a resilient hero, making his journey both inspiring and thrilling. The author does an excellent job of blending character development with fascinating world-building, creating a vivid and immersive setting. The challenges Veer faces and overcomes make for a gripping, enjoyable read. A must-read for fans of character-driven sci-fi!