Right chapter sizes. However, formatting and punctuation need more work. I noticed that the tenses are not consistent. No major grammar issues. Interesting plot. Keep up the good work :)
I srsly don't understand what the blurb means. a girl of a the granddaughter? What's that? I love mafia stories other than vampires and wolves so I'm going to continue reading this. It's hard to follow sometimes with the grammatical error yet the story is kinda interesting but the grammar
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