Maybe I am too cautious about reading, but I myself found a big disadvantage that prevents you from transmitting the content better. It was the punctuation. The way you put them make me hard to read your fantastic story. I really hope to see your chapters get edited shortly, because it deserves it.
The first six chapters are soooo intriguing. Ryder seems to be hiding so much and Bree seems so innocent. I can't wait to finish reading the rest of the updates.
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