Forbidden Thirst

Is this going to have an evil mc that does not have any morals and would do anything for his benefit and would also kill and not fall in love with any "heavenly beauty" woman. Because if he is not this I will not read this.

Whole Novel seems to Copy Paste...Also why the hell People Spamming 5 🌟 when there are Zero Chapter updated?is this Novel worth your time?ANS: NoSave your Time and Brain Cell

Ooohhhh op. no plot, bad translation. overall please avoid to preserve braincells.No Seriously. This novel is so dumb you might as well read a machine translated Novel on another site.

This limit thing is dumb, really makes spam be the more likely approach, anyway.The writing in itself is not bad, didn't see many mistakes if any, the rest is the problem, relationships turn from 0 to 100 real fast, a few hours change everything, didn't help to give depth to characters or make said relationships compelling.The Story is somewhat awkward, the development until the point I read didn't appeal to me and was kind of beaten down by how poorly I felt the relationships developed.The characters seem one dimensional, without depth and completely passive to the world around them, "Oh okay I accept being the support of thirty different people in a setting with real danger and with little to no real benefit besides getting a fiance that fell in love with me at first sight." c'mon, I know how plagued by such things the Isekai genre is, but generally, the typical protagonist is not given a choice he's just suddenly in another world and is screwed, this one made a choice, for me it was the wrong one.Finally, the world or worlds were simply not described, left entirely to the imagination of the reader, it'll already be a challenge in and of itself to make dozens of legitimately compelling worlds, not even bothering to describe them will not help.This story is clearly being written by a beginner author, so let me give a little advice, plan a little ahead, give time to your characters to develop themselves and their relationships, and invest in the world you are creating if you want people to like your story. You don't need to describe the texture of the pebble by the side of the road, but what I'd like to know is, how is the school, how do the characters look, do they have a uniform, does the clairvoyant old man have a huge beard, does the bro-con princess have amber eyes?

This novel is not for those who dislike slow paces, as there is little action as of yet. I personally like how the author is slowly building the world, the people, and the people's situations, in what I can only assume as building up a foundation for the novel to pick up the pace later, possibly going on grand adventures while managing their territory. Somethings I dislike though, would have to be the one-trick pony, Rebecca. She is just barely above useless in terms of her magic, and is portrayed as a compassionate airhead, putting her in an even worse light for me. Her character could be improved later if she were to learn new magic, but I am not expecting much on the personality front, which is ok in the end. The second problem I have would have say would be how Gawain does not use the knowledge he gained from observing the world to its full potential, as it could be used to locate large spots of resources, but it is mainly used as a basic geographical map. Another problem concerning Gawain is how he does not use his knowledge of the present to further technology, but this has been semi-rectified in the later chapters that are currently out, and we can make some speculations about his position in modern society from his actions. The largest problem I have thus far though, would have to be how magic is used, this is never truly explained and readers, like myself, have to make inferences on how magic is cast, made, or studied. I love magic, and I would love to know how the people of this novel use it, which would greatly enhance the novel for people like me. Something I have yet to discuss is the world itself, but you can figure that out just by reading the first third of the novel. I left out quite a few other things I loved and disliked about the novel, although there are vastly more things that I liked than disliked. but overall I Love this novel, and hope it gets picked up, so I can continue to read how the story progresses.Summary- Good novel, highly recommend

This story has a lot of potential. Exciting action, wonderful indepth world building, and everything gets revealed part by part without knowledge cramming and very naturaly. Author is very responsive and his subtile clues are just enough to make you analize and at least partially guess what will happen after a clif wich does not make it boring actually it makes you even more invested and the feeling when you nearly guess is very exhilarating. 1010 book with a lot of potential and very responsive author recommend for every fantasy or magical lover

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Great wuxia novel.For Kylse, please dont misuse this space for your personal reason. This is a review section FOR the novel.Why did the first and the second paragraph of your comment contradicted ? The first one was justified because you did care about the novel itself but why did you defend Qidian and thinks that all of us is stupid on your second paragraph ? isnt this what you call by selfish or personal reason that dont have a connection about thr novel itself ? ** : sorry english wasnt my first leaguage

"So to begin with your training we need to first test you in these respective fields with the help of these magic testing pillars.

The past days after work, both siblings went to Apartment 201, but on different intervals.  As usual Xue Guangxi went there at few minutes past five for his tutorials.  The older sibling, Xue Jinxu dropped by almost every day at a later time, around nine in the evening.  She went there for a chat with the grown men over tea.  She went there to unwind for a bit.