Not bad, but there were several things that I didn’t like such as the psychological development of the MC that was quite poorly executed, but still the world development was really good.
+Good comedy+Good concepts+OP MC-The items favor the plot too much-Slow story progression-disappointing and silly plot later on, author pulled out racism card later on tye path of dominating the world, not even politically.
If your dream job is to be the fry guy at McDonalds then this novel is for you! Not trying to be too negative but I would like to point out that if your going to write a novel like this then at least teach some real-world values with some realism.Like the translators pointed out, the writer makes tons of plot holes.The quality isn't bad at first but then you get too much unnecessary dialogue later on which makes it boring to read and you guessed it, there isn't much action.
Pretty incredible work here, especially for something so early in. I primarily have nothing but praise for this novel, I mean, I binge read it faster than I do most else. But really this story has had such an incredible progression, the writing quality feels top notch (for the site), and it just feels like this is the start of something great.My main positives:I love the pace here, MC progresses fast, maybe a tad too fast at times, but never too slowOnly 230 chapters in and the scope of this world already feels so vast, and if it’s properly explored, will be incredible (SERIOUS props to author on this).Cool enemy and game design and great setup for many future plot lines.Those are the just the huge positives but there is dozens more, now here’ just the most minor of qualms:Slightly concerned about introduction of unused characters, some of them are awesome,but many feel as though they’l serve a purpose and never be seen againMC hasn’t a ton, but I do suppose this can be excused considering there’s quite literally a trait on his soul dedicated to seeking his revenge :P.Anyway, short for time on this review but INCREDIBLE job, can’ wait to see where this goes!
Great start, a bit generic but we come to this genre for this so it's okay, I like the baby start better but can't have everything. I think I'll have a good time with this one
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