Evolved

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"Bu Ana,ada yang tamu yang mencari ibu.Saya minta menunggu di loby.Apakah ibu mau menerima tamu ini?"

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The beautiful weather produced but little impression on his troubled spirit. A heavy weight lay upon his soul, deep melancholy had taken possession of him, and his mind knew no change save from one painful thought to another.

This is my first time seriously reading a webnovel and trying to give critique about it.So far I would say the story is decent, it isn't the greatest ever but it is definitely enjoyable and keeps you wanting to read. There aren't to many chapters yet to give a detailed review but as of now, it definitely has potential to become good if everything gets fleshed out enough.This Webnovel also reminds me a lot of "Savior of Divine Blood" where in that world, people randomly get doors assigned to them in 3 different ranks, bronze, silver and gold. I just thought it's kinda similar with the concept of these doors appearing for people randomly and having a trial for them to complete.Keep up the good work!