Most chapters, or most of their content, is pure info dumps about history and things that would not sdvance or hinder the story whether mentioned or not.
Reading this feels like I'm eating a dish full of spices and some rice on top of it.
Im burning my tongue for eternity just for some rice one in a while.
Imagine it. A bow full of spices and a spoon of rice on top. Instead of a bowl full of rice and a pinch of colorful spices on top.
I give it 3/10.
5 being average quality. Not bad nor good.
7 being good quality.
3 being below average. Needs a lot of editing and improvement.
2 being bad.
1 being brain cancer.
Thank you all for the love. First ten chapters are free for all my readers.
Last ten chapters will be free as well if I get one of these:
200k views or
100 votes
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Most chapters, or most of their content, is pure info dumps about history and things that would not sdvance or hinder the story whether mentioned or not.
Reading this feels like I'm eating a dish full of spices and some rice on top of it.
Im burning my tongue for eternity just for some rice one in a while.
Imagine it. A bow full of spices and a spoon of rice on top. Instead of a bowl full of rice and a pinch of colorful spices on top.
I give it 3/10.
5 being average quality. Not bad nor good.
7 being good quality.
3 being below average. Needs a lot of editing and improvement.
2 being bad.
1 being brain cancer.
Last ten chapters will be free as well if I get one of these:
200k views or
100 votes