Whoever is paying the editor is getting ripped off. The translation is basically unga-bunga speech. Includes flaws such as: jumbled sentences, repeats, missing words, autocorrected words, incorrect homophones, wrong words, abrupt periods, and bad grammar galore.
The plot is good though. Just need to sacrifice a few braincells to the elder gods to enjoy it. 👍
The book is good. However, it's way too long. this could have been broken up into three or more books. I stopped reading after the Sydney and Mark story. The mix-up of names throughout the story got confusing, and then it went right into Aiden and his girlfriends story.
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The plot is good though. Just need to sacrifice a few braincells to the elder gods to enjoy it. 👍