I really don't understand the Novel's 1st place.The novel isn't bad as is, there is a lot of potential in the world building. The characters, while not quite there yet, aren't really bad. The main characters that is. Most side characters pretty much don't have any depth at all.I don't particularly like the way the school life is described. It's a military school. Even if they want students to experience a rough life, students "disappearing" each year? Yeah, who would care about that...There's also other things I consider plotholes that annoy the heck out of me. First describing portals as a precious technology that is only in the hands of three kinds of people, but nevermind the fact that the "dangerous" red portal is accessible at a school, how come there are no guards/you can simply enter?All in all, a good approach but the plot really seems too unlogical to me at times.
This novel description seems very much interesting 😃😃 and it even a new kind of a novel. I hope the author a good luck and please make it great to read ❤️😊❤️😊❤️😊❤️
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This is an updated review after reading 60 chapters,Previously i felt the MC stupid for focusing on subclass as i believed it was a bad investment,But thankfully the mc did change and has now focused more on becoming stronger(not as much as i want but good enough for now),Considering the mc situation ill say his choices weren’t too bad(can’t expect him to be smart from the get go i suppose),Although i still don’t like trickster/disguiser path as i dont like cheap tricks and prefer frontal battle where you simply crush and dominate your enemies,But thats just an opinion and i like that the mc started to slowly focus on his main occupation (although ill still say he could be much stronger if he learns how to grind exp)anyway the story is going in a good direction at the moment, hopefully the mc keeps on his path and doesn’t become a goody two shoes self sacrificing selfless hero as i already have a phobia from these types of dense stupid MC’s( so far the NC has shown no signs whatsover that he will follow that crazy path thankfully)Anyway good luck author I’ll Follow this story(occasionally ill give comments, i only give comments when im annoyed by the mc or a lead character, i cant help myself sometimes to rant whenever the mc makes a choice contrary to what i believe is a better choice and so it’s probably often,,,)Anyway thanks for reading my lenthy unobstructive review.Sorry for writing a review that is more of an opinion than a proper review.
the stories great the way how it describes the situation but to tell you the truth what's making me read the book, because I want to read the part where the girls are about to ride the train
I must say the story line is great. I love the idea of a dungeon-style cultivation novel. I don't think I have read anything like it before. The only downside I have seen so far is the grammar, a bit. I see you use present tense and not past tense a lot. That affects reading as I feel that the way the MC is talking isn't right. Maybe use past tense in the future. Other than that, I like it. Keep up the good work.
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