It was one of the best novel I've ever read. The character building is excellent. Every support characters has his/her own personality. It is also funny sometimes but not cheap. I highly recommend it.
The kind of MC who always got bullied whenever he went, even his parents as well, barely had any friend in school, and always thought himself as a useless being for being born with such a lowly power... compared to others who shot flame, blizzard, thunder and poison from their hands... his Charm wouldn't do much but to max the charisma point in the S.P.E.C.I.A.L points.Or is that so? Anyway, did you noticed that I use mostly past tense for the paragraph above? Well, I wouldn't like to spoil you more, because the satisfaction when the MC finally able to [REDACTED] those bullies... well, you wouldn't be that satisfied knowing [REDACTED]. Definitely worth to read and watch the MC do tons of [REDACTED] with his true power.Then, about the writing... it's clear and vivid, less ambiguous, telling the surrounding and what the character think and do, especially with the first person perspective, making it more easy to follow and understand of what happened.Then there's the dialogue. The dialogue is clearly the strongest point of this stort. Every dialogue sound different to each character---that sense from the annoying brads, the archetype of scaredy-cat persons, etc---giving them rich timbre (or tone color in musical term for rich-sounding music or dialogues in this case).The plot, I have nothing to say anymore as you must read it for yourself to get that sense of "take that, b****!"-ish.About pacing, well I think it's a bit rushing (at least in my standard) in the beginning of chapter when the MC had yet to found his true nature. Hoping to see his past being told as a miserable human, just to see him "return the favour" later on. Well no matter, the story development itself already alright, and I truly enjoy reading it.About grammar, no comment on that, since I'm not native speaker, and you seemed did a better job than me.With that being said, I guess that's all...Lastly but not least, I'd like to thank to the Author who keeps updating and writing this good story for us.Thank you... ^^Keep on writing~
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Haha looks interesting! I've seen novels with similar premise for Otome reincarnations on JPs but never for a CN. I didn't think there would be a story like this. Well too soon to judge but maybe it'll be good???
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