A masterpiece.. And for it to be dropped abd picking up trash generic novels.. Webnovel you're ****! Now I feel whole trial read system is ****! No point ..you don't see ratings you don't see views and readers opinions and just choose based on editors choice or your so called coins used of which we don't even get to see the data.. For fucks sake those novels it picked up won't even last long! Fcking generic trash novels..fck you!
As i already said in some comment chapter if you can go past the Stupid MC and his slow growth then you will enjoy this novel but for me when you write a novel it's about MC and the development of the stories to support him but here their not that just a good storirmes with a trash MC if someone can go past chapter 20 he can make a review and tell me what he think of this MC because even if author said he want to build MC character ut destroy the enjoy of the storie because all you do is reading a stories with no good MC so how can the stories advance at the end make your own idea if you can past chapter 9 and not insult him then you are strong but it's not for me waste of time .And me who was expecting a MC not OP but no so trash i am utterly crushed.
I don't really like to write reviews much but this needs a review. I like how the story comes out strong. It may seem typical with the reincarnate/transmigrate kind of thing but its good. I hardly see any detective books that is quite like this and I'm looking forward to more. Thanks!
If you guys are looking for the netori, harem and r18 stuff might have to wait till this reach 100 chaps. mc character growth is just too strange for someone that was essentially an otaku. Too much self identity crisis and mc is still stuck in thinking in the norm when he is pretty much in a ntr game. The moral thing is just getting annoying at this point, contradicting thoughts that just annoys me or most readers.This is slow paced but don't central this around just the mc since it got boring reading it. Like adding about world building and how that world works from his research in his PC would probably help the mc make solid decisions.Cause from all the chapters so far, he gets pissed most of the time like as if a stick got stuck in his ass when given some info from his "friends". The big events so far that should have boost his character growth a lot, always have a reason to revert him back to normalcy thinking. It was already annoying at the beginning but now it's 45 chapters and little changed other than his physical attributes.Especially the revenge part where he thought this plan and how he was really gonna ruin this girl and even brags about how he will do it right from those shitty "revenge" stories he read in his previous world. Instead we get something that missed that claim..... it would be better if the author never added those sentences/reference cause it just made the mc even more unbearable.it may make sense realistic wise but God dam is it an annoying/bad story telling. Nothing is really note worthy that would hook the reader because of the "slow pace" and the 2 chapters or so of r18 text are probably what 90% of the reader cared about.The slow pace is just hard to pull off and may need to really amp his character. Cause at this point, you can just skip/skim chapters and probably won't miss anything important.
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Story concepts are decent the in game world is okay but overall the story givers the feeling of being a naïve 15 year old boy's fantasy. The mc is a bit dim and the girls are all simple, easy and gullible, supposed to be based in America but it doesn't feel like the author has even read about the country and so doesn't understand the culture, social norms, economy, politics etcetera it feels more like a weird China or Korea I'm at chapter 144, and I want to like the story because the idea is cool, but between the inconsistencies, plot holes, shallow emotionless characters, bulky plot armor and jarring disconnect between the setting and the culture I'd rather spend my coins elsewhere...
Okay, okay, let me start off by saying that this was a really pleasant read! :DLet's start with the writing. Absolutely delightful! :D The writing is descriptive enough for me to be immersed in the story and setting, but clear enough for me to be able to understand the concept hehe :DOkay, and then the characters. Most of the characters are really charming, and I gotta say, especially the protagonist hehe! I really really really like a cunning, smart MC who actually plans ahead and who weighs their option before doing something.And then for the world-building and the concept, I'd say it's pretty good! It's pretty easy to digest, and very well-prepared.Added to the library hehe! Will read more after I drop this review! Great work, author! <3
Absolute garbage, spineless idiotic protagonist. After 50 chapters it's much of the same nonsense. If you're looking for the same taboo relationships I would recommend 'Profane Prince of Domination', because this is comparatively weak. I can't believe I just read 50 chapters of this dumpster trash.
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