黑道教父

Book has been so good. Can’t wait for the rest of it.

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I mean, do you really need a review to tell you to check this out?                                                                           

an enjoiable story althoug a Little short

There is a lot of potential with this style of writing and I do not want to see it be ruined. The elements for a good story are there but there needs to be a lot more background building and show not tell. The story is being rushed and there are rough transitions peppered throughout the novel. I recommend taking your time to smooth out the story and make it flow. There are good materials present, but you have to use them well.

Tooo fluffy~~~~~ Cute male leads. Cute couple. Love the arguments and bickering. But the developmemt of story slightly slow. Hope more frequent update.

Suspense, suspense, suspense 🤓🤓I love how the author produced a detailed chapter, word for word 😍 *sighs* Can't wait for more