"Mysterious orange hoodie guy, we have to stop meeting like this!" I exclaim loudly, so as not to surprise him. He tenses and looks ready to dart away but he has no where to go. The alley is blocked by the restaurant's large trash bin. He remains facing the opposite direction.
It starts strong with a mix of mystery and tension. Arov’s shift from a normal student to an awakened feels intense and gripping. The dream sequence and future vision are chilling. Some parts could use more depth, but it’s a solid start.
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