★ Your Falling Star ★

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Full of plotholes. MC discovered a hidden quest that billions of others did not over a century. This quest was in plain site. I mean, look at all the speedrun of any games out there, people find out everything. Novel story drop terribly when the story moved into being a harem. It's basically him finding more girls to bang. Girls that fall for him are one dimensional. Follows the "he's nice to me, he seem confident and powerful" trope. When I said bang, I wasn't exaggerating.

Let me have the honor of the first review for this awesome new book.First of all just wanna mention that the writing quality is really good so far and the character description and world background is pretty good so far...The updates are also stable so far, hopefully it's not gonna drop.It's not really cringe and edgy either and istolerable enough to read.Also wonder why ray is so eager to be a villain… can't wait to read about his past.Sorry for breaking up the review, I’m omwh and the rides a bit bumpy and to be honest | haven' read enough to make an actual review about this but here I am :)

"OH, OKAY" Baldy shouted as well. It was a natural reaction as people would shout if they had a similar encounter.

"Ania, have you seen a rubber band?"

But I need to make sure.

Dhruv: u don't know her class

First giving a stone here, why? I think this is a good story and fun maybe, so please author or translator dear do the update😊