The Mc is so coward he didn't even dare to save his student and friends who is tortured he even brainwash his pet, and if he afraid really of death then he could just stay in seclusion forever until he reach the peak of cultivation, this novel is so confusing like i thought there are just one demon lord turned out there are millions and the cultivation level you said mahayana realm was the highest but no suddenly there more, the mc be like everything is danger!
i liked this novel alot. nowadays there are not many authors who write ruthless and cold MC's. everyone is trying to create a hero or a heaven's favorite. personally i like aloof, cold and decisive MC's much more. his innate abilities and powers are also interesting. the world building is like any other cultivation world where there are rankings of sects, kingdoms and also even higher level of powerful beings than normal people knows. the only thing i dont like is the huge fillers everywhere. even if two people are talking, you will find two three paragraphs of fillers/explanations for every sentence they speak. alot of filler in between conversations. in full whole chapters two persons will only speak two lines while anything else will be filler explanation. 🤦u200d♂️. thats why 4.8....for writing its 4 for everything else its 5 stars.
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This is a super great work. A writer who knows what his content is and is ready to reveal it to the readers. That's some great writer. The work is perky and full of life of course. Kudos to the writer.
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