DxD: Devil’s Advocate

This book could be awesome but the grammar is awful, and the sentences make no sense. This sounds like someone whose very lacking in education wrote it.  Almost as if a grade school student.  I won’t be reading the rest of this book.  Can’t get past all the awful writing.

dont publish your story if not gonna update everyday, the readers are disappointed and how the readers support you if you gonna like this we were swicth another  book that is completed.

I’ve read this book far too quickly but I love it. Also how often do you try to update?